diff --git a/packages/core/primitives/event-dispatch/README.md b/packages/core/primitives/event-dispatch/README.md
index e862043565944..7ccde4a69fc29 100644
--- a/packages/core/primitives/event-dispatch/README.md
+++ b/packages/core/primitives/event-dispatch/README.md
@@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ This can introduce a couple problems:
       <!--
       There's a window of time between when the button is rendered and the
       script below reaches the client, either because there's a lot of content
-      streamed in-between, network lag, or the script asynchronously loaded via
-      a follow-up network request rather than as part of the main document
+      streamed in-between, network lag, or the script is asynchronously loaded
+      via a follow-up network request rather than as part of the main document
       content.
       ->
       ...