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-    Consider the following scenario: one of the twins, whom we shall refer to as
-    the "rocket twin", always travels along the $x$ axis. Their position at time
-    $t$ relative to the Earth is denoted by $x(t)$, where $t$ represents the
-    time measured by a clock on Earth. At any given time $t$, we will denote
+    Consider the following scenario: the traveling twin, whom we shall refer to
+    as the "rocket twin", always travels along the $x$ axis. Their position at
+    time $t$ relative to the Earth is denoted by $x(t)$, where $t$ represents
+    the time measured by a clock on Earth. At any given time $t$, we will denote
     $S_t'$ as the instantaneous rest frame of the rocket twin, that is, the
     frame whose origin coincides with the position of the rocket twin at time
     $t$ and moves at the same velocity as the rocket twin (see
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     Given that $S_t'$ is instantaneously traveling together with the rocket
-    twin, a clock situated at the origin of $S_t'$ will, for a brief period
-    $\Di{\tau}$ (experienced in $S_t'$), tick at the same rate as a clock
+    twin, a clock situated at the origin of $S_t'$ will, for a brief period of
+    time $\Di{\tau}$ (experienced in $S_t'$), tick at the same rate as a clock
     carried by the rocket twin (i.e., both clocks will remain synchronized
-    during $\Di{\tau}$). By dividing the journey of the rocket twin into
-    infinitesimal segments, we can determine the rocket twin's aging by summing
-    up the time experienced by the clock in each frame $S_t'$ associated with
-    these segments. This cumulative time is referred to as the
-    <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Proper_time">proper time</a>
-    ($\tau$) of the rocket twin, a key concept in special relativity.
+    during $\Di{\tau}$). Therefore, by dividing the journey of the rocket twin
+    into infinitesimal segments, we can determine their aging by summing up the
+    time experienced by the clocks in each frame $S_t'$ associated with these
+    segments. This cumulative time is referred to as the
+    <a href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Proper_time">proper time</a> ($\tau$)
+    of the rocket twin, a key concept in special relativity.
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