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diff --git a/docs/src/components/pricing/FAQ.tsx b/docs/src/components/pricing/FAQ.tsx
@@ -17,15 +17,11 @@ const faqData = [
     summary: 'How do I know if I need to buy a license?',
     detail: (
       <React.Fragment>
-        If you are in doubt, check the license file of the npm package you're installing.
-        <br />
-        <br />
-        For instance <Link href="https://unpkg.com/@mui/x-data-grid/LICENSE">
-          @mui/x-data-grid
-        </Link>{' '}
-        is MIT while{' '}
-        <Link href="https://unpkg.com/@mui/x-data-grid-pro/LICENSE">@mui/x-data-grid-pro</Link> is
-        commercial.
+        If you are in doubt, check the license file of the npm package you're installing. For
+        instance <Link href="https://unpkg.com/@mui/x-data-grid/LICENSE">@mui/x-data-grid</Link> is
+        an MIT License (free) while{' '}
+        <Link href="https://unpkg.com/@mui/x-data-grid-pro/LICENSE">@mui/x-data-grid-pro</Link> is a
+        Commercial License.
       </React.Fragment>
     ),
   },
@@ -64,20 +60,30 @@ const faqData = [
     ),
   },
   {
-    summary: 'Why does developers using MUI X indirectly needs to be licensed?',
+    summary: 'Why do we must license developers not using the software directly?',
     detail: (
       <React.Fragment>
-        The number of seats purchased must include developers using MUI X Pro or Premium directly{' '}
-        <strong>and indirectly</strong>.
+        Our pricing model requires all developers working on the same project that the software is
+        used into to be licensed. This is designed to make it easier for your engineers to use the
+        software without having to constantly verify if they have the right number of seats. It aims
+        to replicate one of the great properties open-source licenses have: simplicity.
         <br />
         <br />
-        We are including indirect developers in the pricing model to help reduce the creation of
-        silos in your engineering organization. If only direct developers needed a license, then
-        only a handful of engineers would be allowed to use MUI X.
+        Our pricing model also requires developers using the software indirectly to be licensed,
+        e.g. through a wrapper library. This is because the more developers in your organization
+        using the software, the more they need comprehensive documentation, and the more hedge cases
+        they will ask to be supported.
         <br />
         <br />
-        In exchange, the price point per developer is lower than it would be if only direct
-        developers needed a seat.
+        The price point per developer was adjusted to be much lower than what it would be if only
+        direct use needed a license.{' '}
+        <Link
+          target="_blank"
+          rel="noopener"
+          href="https://mui.com/store/legal/mui-x-eula/#required-quantity-of-licenses"
+        >
+          The clause in the EULA.
+        </Link>
       </React.Fragment>
     ),
   },

diff --git a/docs/src/components/pricing/WhatToExpect.tsx b/docs/src/components/pricing/WhatToExpect.tsx
@@ -36,8 +36,9 @@ export default function WhatToExpect() {
             </Box>
             <Typography variant="body2" color="text.secondary">
               You can use the software in a production environment forever. All the versions of the
-              software released until the end of your subscription are available. There are no
-              further charges unless you choose to continue development.
+              software released until the end of your subscription are available in perpetuity.
+              There are no further charges unless you choose to continue development. See the
+              &quot;Development license&quot; section of this page for more details.
             </Typography>
           </Paper>
         </Grid>
@@ -56,10 +57,10 @@ export default function WhatToExpect() {
               </Typography>
             </Box>
             <Typography variant="body2" color="text.secondary">
-              The licenses are sold on a per-developer basis. The Pro plan includes a cap at 10
-              developers, extra developers do not need to be licensed. You can contact{' '}
-              <Link href="mailto:sales@mui.com">sales</Link> for a volume discount when licensing
-              over 50 developers under the Premium plan.
+              The licenses are sold on a per-developer basis, using the software directly or
+              indirectly. The Pro plan includes a cap at 10 developers, extra developers do not need
+              to be licensed. You can contact <Link href="mailto:sales@mui.com">sales</Link> for a
+              volume discount when licensing over 50 developers under the Premium plan.
             </Typography>
           </Paper>
         </Grid>
@@ -78,9 +79,11 @@ export default function WhatToExpect() {
               </Typography>
             </Box>
             <Typography variant="body2" color="text.secondary">
-              With your purchase you are entitled to technical support (for MUI X components) and
-              access to new versions for the duration of your subscription. You can{' '}
-              <Link href="https://mui.com/x/introduction/support/">learn more about support</Link>{' '}
+              With your purchase you receive support and access to new versions for the duration of
+              your subscription. You can{' '}
+              <Link href="https://mui.com/x/introduction/support/#technical-support">
+                learn more about support
+              </Link>{' '}
               in the docs. Note that, except for critical issues, e.g. security, we release bug
               fixes, and other improvements on top of the latest version, instead of patching older
               versions.