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Editorial: use Infra list syntax in mutations #762

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@annevk annevk commented May 17, 2019

As pointed out at #695 (review) it would be nice if this were more consistent.


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As pointed out at #695 (review) it would be nice if this were more consistent.
<li><p>If <var>node</var> is {{DocumentFragment}} <a>node</a>, then set <var>addedNodes</var> to
<var>node</var>'s <a>children</a>.

<li><p>Otherwise, if <var>node</var> is non-null, set <var>addedNodes</var> to « <var>node</var> ».
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@domenic this is the only change that felt a little weird here due to it getting so much longer, but it's probably better?

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Yeah, this matches the code better. Nested ternaries are not great in either English or code, IMO. You could also use dl class="switch".

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a {{DocumentFragment}} <a>node</a>, and a
list containing solely <var>node</var> otherwise.
<li><p>Let <var>nodes</var> be <var>node</var>'s <a>children</a>, if <var>node</var> is a
{{DocumentFragment}} <a>node</a>, « <var>node</var> » otherwise.
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This reads really wrong; I'm not happy with where we've landed if this is what happens. Commas just don't work that way. Semicolon could work, or using a conjunction (either "and" or "or").

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Same if otherwise comes first? I see now I put them wrong way around. I guess I can do some follow-up on Monday in that original thread on this.

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Ah I see. If otherwise comes first it isn't as viscerally wrong, but I still have a slight preference for a conjunction or semicolon.

<li><p>If <var>node</var> is {{DocumentFragment}} <a>node</a>, then set <var>addedNodes</var> to
<var>node</var>'s <a>children</a>.

<li><p>Otherwise, if <var>node</var> is non-null, set <var>addedNodes</var> to « <var>node</var> ».
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Yeah, this matches the code better. Nested ternaries are not great in either English or code, IMO. You could also use dl class="switch".

@annevk annevk merged commit e6b69e3 into master May 21, 2019
@annevk annevk deleted the annevk/be-more-consistent-with-lists branch May 21, 2019 07:41
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